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Thread: Man's Heritage

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    Inactive Member stormy868's Avatar
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    This is a little preachy:

    Let's keep our Land as God has planned
    Arrayed in all it's beauty
    With trees so tall and lakes so blue
    Should not this be man's duty?

    The scenic view along the way
    Is a sight that's well worth seeing.
    I'm sure the beauty of it all
    Was planned for the human being.

    The birds that twitter in the trees
    And hop from bough to bough,
    Have a language that is all their own,
    And understand, somehow.

    The fishes in the lakes and streams
    Dart here and there so graceful,
    The water, rippling o're the rocks,
    To one seems very restful.

    The rivers man has harnessed
    And changed their very flow
    Are now a blessing to mankind
    "Cause, Man has made it so".

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    I like the rythm but i when i read it i get caught in this stanza:

    The birds that twitter in the trees
    And hop from bough to bough,
    Have a language that is all their own,
    And understand, somehow.
    <font size="2" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">otherwise it's not to bad.

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